tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post5706200242642995143..comments2014-06-30T18:07:13.866-07:00Comments on Twilight Ever After: CHAPTER TWENTYJonathan Cameronhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03958690103830872980noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-39536584258985216522012-05-13T23:12:03.266-07:002012-05-13T23:12:03.266-07:00although it has taken me 12 months to read this i ...although it has taken me 12 months to read this i think this one is the most intriguing yet... i have to admit i was on the edge of my seat wandering just how the first vampire was created.... great job johnathon... i notice it finishes at chapter 21 what happens next??Kaye Dilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857542358939738070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-49636476446701234862011-04-03T04:29:26.791-07:002011-04-03T04:29:26.791-07:00Great job! Loved it!Great job! Loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-77919078990563949812011-03-12T05:08:50.711-08:002011-03-12T05:08:50.711-08:00nice turn i really like the movement can't wai...nice turn i really like the movement can't wait for more. You're story is really good keep up the good work <br /><br />DebsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-33627489541138129102011-03-11T01:54:51.660-08:002011-03-11T01:54:51.660-08:00Awesome... this is getting interesting as well as ...Awesome... this is getting interesting as well as being on the edge of your seat, cant wait for the next chapter, keep up the excellent work Jonathan.Vampireluverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09805506084809303294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-49233066433554966412011-03-10T10:20:46.230-08:002011-03-10T10:20:46.230-08:00Iv gotta say i love what your doing here! iv recom...Iv gotta say i love what your doing here! iv recommended it to all my 'Tw-hard' friends to read (:<br />I cant wait to read chapter 21...im so excited! xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-67991588685749489302011-03-10T03:34:48.197-08:002011-03-10T03:34:48.197-08:00great chapter definatley worth the wait i love tha...great chapter definatley worth the wait i love that there its longer toomichelle thompsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-64827228204923698212011-03-09T18:35:00.691-08:002011-03-09T18:35:00.691-08:00I love the new, longer chapters, it was a long wai...I love the new, longer chapters, it was a long wait but it was worth it! keep writing and keep me updated!- Mrs. Kayla Corrine CullenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-33284290399465036482011-03-09T14:46:21.265-08:002011-03-09T14:46:21.265-08:00This is really good...waiting for more :-)This is really good...waiting for more :-)Angelicanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-4098243209604033552011-03-08T18:46:23.515-08:002011-03-08T18:46:23.515-08:00Hello again. This is the publisher. You have done ...Hello again. This is the publisher. You have done a great job writing these chapters. But you have to do what you want it to be about. Don't do what other people tell you to do unless you know you have to do it. Besides that you have no misspellings. All you have to check for is paraphrasing and spelling. Besides that you have done a great job with this. I shall get Stephenie on the line if I can and get her to read this. Good Luck. Keep up the good work and fall into Stephenie Meyer's footprints. =)<br /><br /> -ANONYMOUSAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-66897087476282581662011-03-08T14:07:25.340-08:002011-03-08T14:07:25.340-08:00Wonderful just wonderful. keep up the good work ca...Wonderful just wonderful. keep up the good work can't wait till next chapter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00965337691701028872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-17541743535977796492011-03-08T11:58:45.131-08:002011-03-08T11:58:45.131-08:00Great job Jonathan cannot wait until Volturi decid...Great job Jonathan cannot wait until Volturi decide what to do or what's up their sleeve.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13392111527556517106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-44729405564495164382011-03-08T10:26:42.957-08:002011-03-08T10:26:42.957-08:00Hey guys - firstly, happy birthday to Michelle for...Hey guys - firstly, happy birthday to Michelle for Friday, hope you had an awesome day!<br />If you're reading this then your've probably just read Chapter 20! Don't forget to comment. As the story progresses, and in order to make it as interesting as I can, I am having to move further and further away from where Stephanie Meyer left the Saga at Breaking Dawn. So I hope that you all feel I am still capturing her voice in this. Sorry about the wait for this one, I was away for a few weeks and this chapter did take significantly longer purely for the reason that I'm trying to answer some things now in the story that aren't actually touched in Twilight - which is pretty crucial :D<br /><br />Look forward to reading what you guys have to say,<br />JJonathan Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03958690103830872980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-60984619400431917272011-03-08T03:52:38.284-08:002011-03-08T03:52:38.284-08:00oh im excited! Wonderful chapter! Just bring the n...oh im excited! Wonderful chapter! Just bring the next one out more quickly! I was starting to think something horrible happen to you and it was worrying me!<br />MichelleMichellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2993784331426446602.post-36788538905961888042011-03-08T03:26:16.803-08:002011-03-08T03:26:16.803-08:00Okay, I am so excited by the way this is going...C...Okay, I am so excited by the way this is going...Can't wait to see what Aro and Caius have in mind...You are doing such a wonderful job and Continuing the Saga....Plz post again soonAmanda Shecklernoreply@blogger.com